Words and Character Art for a Fantasy Adventure Story.

This site contains text and images for Aether Torrent: a party-based action-adventure fantasy novel currently in the process of refinement.

I started writing Aether Torrent in May of 2007 simply for the amusement of myself and my friends. Eleven years of refinement and half a million words across various versions later, here we are.

So, what's the story about?

Tori, an atheist who makes a living by stealing treasures and working retail, wants to turn her black-market boss's ill-gotten treasures into a legitimate, life-affirming museum. Avani, a devoutly religious fugitive blamed for her temple's violence, wants to evangelize safely distant from the influence of her temple's zealots. The girls' paths cross, and they help each other fight their way out of their respective bad situations. Tori then claims to have a distant contact -- the identity of whom she keeps to herself -- who can grant both of their wishes.

Over the course of one week, Tori and Avani travel between city-states and wilderness. They are joined by Cirrus, a flying, shape-shifting tiger woman who once hunted Avani but had a change of heart. The party battles other monsters and helps other people on their brief journey. All the while, they race time; if they take too long, more of Avani's pursuers will find them, and Tori's "museum" treasures will disappear before the world can appreciate them like she does.

Magic exists in their world as a natural force. Ordinary people wielding the proper tools can draw out elements of the omnipresent aether and use them to supplement the world's early-20th-century technology. Those who do so frequently are called elementalists.

Recent Updates

1 June 2018: Aether Torrent is now in a good enough shape to seek agent representation for publishing. In celebration, here's a commission of Avani from the esteemed GhostGreen, and an absolutely outstanding group image of our heroes from Lalou! Also, though it breaks my heart to do it, I've removed all the illustrations of characters not appearing in Book 1, so as not to confuse newcomers. The imagery will return someday, I'm sure.

1 May 2018: Happy May! Work progresses. That is all.

1 April 2018: While the beta is being beta-read, enjoy this image of the protagonists by AnushBanush!

1 March 2018: Progress update: The work is Done, and in the hands of beta readers. Stay tuned!

Thanks for reading, and please look forward to future developments!

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